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Why it took so long

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-08-16 02:02 PM

im not so special you know,
im so ordinary,
just another man,
living life,
without a foolproof plan,
yet i dont take risks,
thats why im alone,
here in my pit,
where i throws fits,
about what went wrong,
why i took so long,
to tell my love,
my sad,sad song,
to hold her close,
and to love her most

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poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-08-20 09:25 AM

Sometimes you wonder which is the greatest of two evils....taking risks with love, or sitting alone in the rooms of your life - knowing you're safe, yet very cold.....? You don't know how many times I've played this game with myself....It's hard either way you choose....good luck my friend! I like how your poems evoke a certain thought from the reader, that's what gets me rambling on so about it!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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