Open Poetry #1 |
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Looking Glass |
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la hac' awwni Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44Euless, Tx, 76039 |
Lookin' through the window tonight-the rain streakin' the glass, I was thinkin' of you. Thoughts of what you looked like, of what you've become and what we would say to each other flooded my mind. Left my room and walked outside in the rain to clear my brain. The shiny rainy streets were deserted and occasionly a car sprayed by. The clouds hung low over the darkened buildings, weeping. Looking at the closed store windows, your reflection looked back at me. A raindrop driped into my eyes and the image of you disappeared. ------------------ |
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poohbear Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 42piedmont,sc |
very thought provoking...who were you referin to ??? your inner self??? part of you you hve missed??? |
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la hac' awwni Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44Euless, Tx, 76039 |
Thanks poohbear, it's part of a running 2 year email discourse with a friend. ------------------ |
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la hac' awwni Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44Euless, Tx, 76039 |
Thanks poohbear, it's part of a running 2 year email discourse with a friend. ------------------ |
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la hac' awwni Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44Euless, Tx, 76039 |
Thanks poohbear, it's part of a running 2 year email discourse with a friend. ------------------ |
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