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A Rose Without Thorns

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-08-15 09:55 PM

A Rose Without Thorns

Where there is room
in ones heart
for happiness,
there is room
to plant
some new roots.

A plant
to mysteriously
grow into
a life long friend.
To act like a weed
starving off
all the sadness,
and frustration
in one's life.

Blossoms emitting
fragrance
of peace, and harmony,
to cherish
every waking day.

The plant
you've given me
is like a rose
without thorns.
Forever beautiful,
and always there.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-08-16 12:20 PM

A lovely poem, with a great metaphor. This expresses precisely how I feel about my best friend.

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

2 posted 1999-08-16 12:36 PM

Very nice poem.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-08-16 12:38 PM

Very beautiful..

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

4 posted 1999-08-16 02:42 AM

I'm afraid there is no such thing as a rose without thorns, just as there is no such thing as perfect friendship. But it is a lovely poem, nevertheless.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

5 posted 1999-08-16 07:55 AM

I thank all of you for your kind responses.

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