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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-08-15 02:56 PM


Prey do not think buffoon

My feelings within like a sin
Rise from the deep
But they never stay deep within
When I'm asleep.

A chasm holds them deep and grim,
Where are no bars,
It lies there just within the rim,
Love and the stars.

But would the chasm have a floor,
Or I some wings,
I would do much much more then soar
And wish for things.

We'd soar, soar with wings together
Out the abyss,
And fly as light as a feather,
Floating in bliss.

We would comet and light the night
And day the sky,
Laying the heavens in plain sight,
Before all eyes.

We would sing a duet of love,
Laugh and cajole,
And I'd send a bouquet by dove,
Holding my soul.

A large carat star your finger,
The ring would be
And married thus we could linger,
Forever free.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 1999-08-16 07:45 AM


How nice to see marriage referred to as "forever free"... Very nice, Sy...
Poet deVine
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2 posted 1999-08-16 10:29 AM


Lovely phrases here...liked this one a lot!

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 1999-08-16 11:36 AM


Thank you both. You make my day. To say mothing of the nights.
caroline
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4 posted 1999-08-31 08:31 PM


I just had to bring this back up to the top and say that it is awesome! Seymour you have quite a gift!

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5 posted 1999-08-31 08:48 PM


Lovely, Seymour... I particularly like the last 2 verses!
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 1999-08-31 09:48 PM


Caroline and suthern,
How far back did you have to go to find this one? I had forgotten I posted it.
However my thanks and love go to both of you.
*L*

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