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Matt
New Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1
Newport, South wales, UK

0 posted 1999-08-15 07:12 AM

When I saw you standing there
The wind blowing freely through your hair
That untroubled smile gracing your face
Denying me the power to flee this place

Comparing you to a mere earthly flower
Doesn’t expose your beauty’s full power
You should be compared to a heavenly star
At least that states just what you are

So forgive me now if I’m bothering you
I always hoped you loved me too
I only wanted a chance to stay
Alongside you and wash the tears away

So remember me as you walk away
As all I do is sit here and cry
As you live enjoying yourself
I’m having trouble saying goodbye

I was born to love you!

[This message has been edited by Matt (edited 08-16-99).]

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 1999-08-15 09:09 AM

Matt, Very nice job, I love the last line "I was born to love you"

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 1999-08-15 12:08 PM

Matt, I've read stuff like this before, but you did a good job.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 1999-08-15 12:11 PM

Welcome sir to the family! If you use the edit button (with the pen) you can change this line:
I always hoped you loved myme? too

Nicely done! I loved your way with words here..'denying me the power to flee'..great phrase!

thursdayschild
Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 169
Houston, Tx.

4 posted 1999-08-15 09:54 PM

How could any woman resist
a declaration such as this?
Nice Matt....

DarkChiild
Junior Member

since 1999-08-09

Posts 18

5 posted 1999-08-16 12:59 PM

I envy you.. I'm miserable at writing the mushy stuff. But good job, it was well expressed

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Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 1999-08-16 08:07 AM

This is very nicely done, Matt...Keep 'em coming...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-04-18 04:39 AM

nicely done...very romantic!

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