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Spirit of the Song |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Such beauty in the spirit of the song, Like tiny angels flighting thousandfold- Like gold in love’s first kiss that wakes the dawn. And such a voice does not know right from wrong, Reaching out for meaning to keep hold- Such beauty in the spirit of the song. Ensculpting images in flight along, this voice cannot render what it is told- like gold in love’s first kiss that wakes the dawn. 'Tis ever-changing yet, so very calm, The paintings in the mind are strong and bold- Such beauty in the spirit of the song. Each word this voice sings lingers on and on... Love’s measured in incense and in gold- like gold in love’s first kiss that wakes the dawn. N’er there were alterations that were wrong. Feeling takes upon those much too cold. Such beauty in the spirit in the spirit of the song, Like gold in love’s first kiss that wakes the dawn. ©1999 Erin Solari ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." [This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 08-15-99).] [This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 08-17-99).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very well done. Beautiful imagery. Michael |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow - this is so cool  It flows like the melody I can almost hear in your work! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you so much, Michael and Severn! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Beautiful, thank you. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
OK - one voice - check out the Analysis Forum for my overview..... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
One voice, this is great! A villanelle is difficult to tackle for anyone and you breezed through it with ease. Very, very nice job! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Agree with balladeer you did a great job. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you so much...all of you! Nan, on my way...------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, very beautiful!! I loved the imagery! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you, Alwye! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is very good miss one and only and to see its in a restricted form yuh it makes it better that i couldnt tell |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Wonderful work, my dear. I'm watching you grow as a poet with avid interest. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you, thank you... I am proud of this piece... I worked extra hard on it. Thanks all of you! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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