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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Nightstalker I walk through the grass The air is sickly sweet Noone else is here Mist swirls around my feet My pain is growing worse I need to slake my thirst My life is over But it's gonna get much worse Trapped within this withered shell I live out my undead hell Rising nightly from the grave To your blood I am a slave Coming down the avenue A lovely lady comes in view I draw her close with mystic eye She doesn't know it's time to die Swift bite, dark red Hold her close, tilt her head Grip her tight, hear her moan Feel the snap of broken bone Hear her heartbeat slowing down Let her drop onto the ground Now I've fed, time to play I throw her down an alleyway Trapped within this withered shell I live out my undead hell Rising nightly from the grave To your blood I am a slave I walk through the grass The air is sickly sweet Noone else is here Mist swirls around my feet My pain is growing more I need to slake my thirst My life is over But it's gonna get much worse Alicat ------------------ Le Jongleur Aspirante |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
take me...take me!!! i'll even bare my neck for thee i do so enjoy a good vampyre poem...well done Alicat  |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Childe, thy offer has been considered and found worthy of blood tainted reality. Come close once more and I shall lead thee unto thy rest. Alicat And the angels were silent and wept bloody tears. |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Great poem! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow! I really like the way you portrayed this night stalker. Absolutely a fantastic job! They don't know it's their time to die, you could really feel this one. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh - we don't see any new work from you for awhile - and when we do, you just miss the new forum opening by a few brief hours.... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wowee!! I'm nearly scared ****less with this one! Yikes! This is certainly "different"....I'm turning the lights on now.....I'll be right back......(heading for the lightswitch) ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Whoa! Creepy and wonderful Good poetry. A |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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