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I Am All Alone
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I Am All Alone |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Will someone please explain to me just what I need to know? I look for answers carefully, but none do seem to show. When it’s love that you would die for, just where is it you go, when One you love betrays you more than you would like to know? Could someone please shed light on me and let me know what’s real? I’ve been betrayed so truthfully- I don’t know how to feel. Wondering if it’s another... it bites upon my heel. I’m a wife and I’m a mother- I’m losing what is real. Where does he go in dead of night? Where is he when I wake? Why is it I go through this fright? Did I make a mistake? Perhaps, some day I will find trust if my life He should take. For now, I’ll do just what I must. From nightmares I will wake. These dreams of madness keep me sane. I lie in bed alone. Like raindrops on the window pane, I fall to earth and stone. I roll in mud, the filth and muck. I hear the gentle drone. I find that I am all but stuck. And I am all alone. ©1999 Erin Solari ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I'm sorry, my dear. I have few answers, only a dry shoulder and an open heart to offer. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you, Dream. ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Would that I could answer, but I can not for such questions I've never had to ask and such answers I've never had to seek. I only hope your offering here is far from the truth of your life... if not, then you have my support within these poetic halls. My best to you as you have shown your best here. Thanks for sharing. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You must find the answers yourself, one voice, but, if it is any consolation, you are not alone. You have family here. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's nice to see a poet progress in writing style. You get better with each posting. I admire you for sharing your inner most private thoughts with us.  |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
I wish I had a answer for you. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
I must thank you all! And Poet deVine, such praise from you is ego-boosting! Thank you. ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
You're never truly alone, as long as there's love in your heart to give! And it seems to me that since you're searching for an answer, you care. And as long as you care, there's always hope! ------------------ ...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice. -Billy Joel |
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Terri Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 82Turtle Creek, PA |
Dear One, Please remember, he is but one of many parts that make up the whole of You. I feel for you and the anguish you've expressed. Love yourself, love your children and you will fill that void. Enough preaching....thank you for the touching poem! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you all very much!  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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juanita Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68Los Angeles, CA, USA |
My tears are streaming down my face, a deep corner of my heart, your poem touched, for great pain I have known and to your soul, a sister am I. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Well, dear sister, welcome to my happy family! I am so glad you enjoyed this piece.------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
love your self...and your heart will never be broken...that is the most important, and most precious love of all, in my opinion (for what it's worth) |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you so much, elvira! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
~One just getting here to find your other poem and wow.... this is great.. good job.. I think at sometime or the other all of us end here ... in mind or in reality... well done.. on my way..... cya |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you, Tori! You're so sweet! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
I know how you feel - that sort of loneliness is the hardest to bear. Keep writing - we are there for you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
One Voice, I can only say love yourself and you will find love every where. |
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