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Open Poetry #1

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juanita
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 68
Los Angeles, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-08-13 03:17 AM

If my soul could cross the distance
that separates me from you
hand-in-hand, we could walk
and I could sing of my love
to you!
My song will whisper in your ear
of a love as infinite and as endless
as the majestic sea
where your soul and my own
could dream the impossible dream
Climbing the mountain
of my unfortunate fate
lamenting the cruelty of the destiny
that takes me from your love away
In the dusk of the evening
when the daylight painfully dies
I look out my window
contemplating in nature
a love so complete
my heart feels the dagger
of imminent despair
But I know
somewhere in the silvery rays
of the moon
your thoughts and my thoughts
at midnight will meet
GP

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

1 posted 1999-08-13 03:30 AM

Welcome to the forums, juanita

johnl
New Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 1

2 posted 1999-08-13 08:49 AM

You so beautifully evoke the aching heart, separated across space and time, longing for reunion and renewal, knowing the possibilities of fate, anticipating the ultimate fusion into one. If you dont risk everything you stand to gain nothing!!

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

3 posted 1999-08-13 09:27 AM

Very nice content in this piece ! Really magical...welcome welcome!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

juanita
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 68
Los Angeles, CA, USA

4 posted 1999-08-14 03:51 AM

Thanks for your welcome and for you ff for your thoughtful encouragement!!!

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