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Twice the more

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-08-12 09:00 PM

Twice the more

I have you twice within my heart,
The younger and grown-up part,
One fascinates my eyes today
The other dreamy yesterday.

Your innocence warmed me through,
The childish trust that I knew.
And todays superintend,
God, I love them both, no end.

You are to me a real compound,
The inner and the latter bound,
The two of you that I adore
And in this way it's twice the more.

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 1999-08-12 09:18 PM

Great job!
To be at peace, one must first accept the balance of their two true selves!

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Where did I go wrong, I never needed this before,
I need a woman, to help me feel.
-Live-

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

2 posted 1999-08-13 12:44 PM

Enjoyable poem.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-08-13 07:45 AM

Thank you both for the read and comments.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-06-20 06:55 PM

so beautiful sir. It is so very beautiful. you always know what you have.

enjoyed

teddymarvelle
Junior Member

since 2007-08-26

Posts 47
california usa

5 posted 2007-08-28 12:08 PM

wow i feel the same for my daughter ... even tho she is just blooming into woman hood... ... thank you for this

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