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Sparked then Enflamed |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Press of the lips Stop of the heart, Fresh is the passion, Sweet is the flavor. Remember the gentleman. Rush of the blood. Warm is the memory. Chilled is the collected plan. Meeting of eyes Collision of fates. Dangerous is the love Intriguing the mystery. Brush of fingertips Holding of hands. Fulfilled is the destiny. Desire the flame. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is really good! I am impressed by your ability to do free verse, I'm so set in my ways with rhyme it's hard to break out. I like this a lot! |
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milt Junior Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 18whitley city ky usa |
passionate, well written. I like it alot |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very passionate, a wonderful job, I must say! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
very lust filled and beautiful, great job. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Not a wasted letter. Everything in the proper place and meaningful. Great job, Temptress. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely done...alot said with very little words. The flow of this just moved along very nicely. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Is this the first one? *grins* Oh, to be three years younger. LOL |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
hey jen, this is neat! I like it! I just ventured into open poetry 1 to see some of your old stuff. I like  |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
hey jen, this is neat! I like it! I just ventured into open poetry 1 to see some of your old stuff. I like |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
You don't mind if I search around do you? Is this really your first poem here?? You were good even then. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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