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Kev
New Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 2
West Palm Beach, FL, USA

0 posted 1999-08-11 05:56 PM


Thoughts on this are more than welcome-

* Open Feelings To My Angel *

Angel, my love, your heart is my desire,
And your inner beauty sets my soul on fire!

Then I stop and think...

Honesty and Sincerity are the words that count,
Could you be true, could you be real,
I really start to wonder...
This is how I feel.

My heart skips a beat, my mind starts to race,
Everytime that I see... your lovely face.
I believe the mind is the key, to things that may be,
And in my thoughts to you, I am very, very true.
You say you really care, and then you dare,
To show strong affection, yet in another direction.

I ask you now, be true, be real...
This I must say, is really how I feel.

My heart is not a toy to be played with,
True love is here, it is not a myth.
My mind is filled with passion and desire,
You honestly do set my soul on fire!
Its not sex, or the thought of your magnificent body,
I want to be your love, and maybe sometimes be naughty.

I would really rather cuddle, and snuggle, with you...
Tell you my thoughts, hopes and dreams, and rarely argue,
Passion of the minds and souls would melt...
This could be true, and real, if what you've told me you felt.

Could I take you to an upper level, a higher place,
Make your dreams come true, just as I wish with you?
Under moonlit skies above, I promise to always love...
Just you, only you, with true and honest affection,
That will never, ever, be passed in anothers direction.


© Copyright 1999 Kev - All Rights Reserved
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-08-11 06:26 PM


ain't love grand?...Welcome to the forum, Kev


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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...Music to my Ears...hoarse whispers...What will it be?...just watching tv...break my heart...are you ready?...Feel the need?...serving wench...Tribute to M.J....take a guess...sink or swim...stolen hours...the mistress...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...
life is like...insomnia...devotion...too soon...07-20-69...craving...Master...chat?...apart...plain...hush...then...vice...shameless self promotion



angel girl
Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322
within a whisper...
2 posted 1999-08-12 08:08 AM


Ahhhhh, this is so sweet. I wish every guy could be like you.

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 1999-08-12 10:19 AM


I enjoyed reading this. Honesty and Sincerity
are important, but mostly Trust. Good job.

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