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Estrangement..

Mark R.
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 113
San Francisco, CA.

0 posted 1999-08-11 05:09 PM

Is it so necessary to be here,
So far from home, yet so near.
My thoughts aloud, wishing you to hear,
All about my terrors and my fears.

Wandering aimlessly towards nothingness
Betrayed only by my own loneliness.
Deny me not your sweet comfort now,
Indulge me with love instead of ciao.

Have faith in the happiness we found in
each other,
As the happiness found between you and
mother.

"Dear father, I need you back!"
For it is your guidance which I lack.....

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-08-11 07:56 PM

Beautifully written Mark

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

2 posted 1999-08-11 10:09 PM

I know that feeling,would do anything to
have my father back.Nicely written

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

3 posted 1999-08-13 01:12 PM

Very moving....touched my 'ol naughty heart...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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