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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-08-11 04:09 PM

I remember when first I felt His love.
Revelation was just not on my mind.
It truly hit like a bolt from above.
To an empty life I had been resigned.

Exposed to Him was every nagging doubt.
He loved me despite my hatred and sin.
My feelings of despair were washed right out.
I knew that I would not be alone again.

I did not rail against the coming Light.
When He touched my heart I began to weep.
I cried for what I had lost to the Night.
He touched my heart and my fears went to sleep.

Now I know He walks by my side unseen.
He is Jesus, the blessed Nazarene.

©1999 DreamEvil

Just trying to stay versatile.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 08-11-99).]

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

1 posted 1999-08-11 04:16 PM

I love it! Very inspiring! Great Job!

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

2 posted 1999-08-11 04:54 PM

Well Done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

3 posted 1999-08-11 06:02 PM

Truly Awesome!!! Wow! I knew it wasn't gone.

Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

4 posted 1999-08-11 06:43 PM

DE.. I LOVE IT!! Im proud of you.. this poem I believe is yur best love.. *hugs* Smile.. I love it.. I really do.. lol.. did I mention that I really like it!!! WOW... hehe love ya!!

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Gënt£ë¤§°û£

Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30

Posts 444
USA

5 posted 1999-08-11 07:32 PM

Fantastic ... Jesus has a way of calming fear, doesn't he? Good one, DE.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-08-11 07:42 PM

Dream...very beautiful. Do you realize the demand for religious poetry out there??

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 1999-08-11 09:00 PM

Perhaps this belongs on the mainsite in the Spiritual Section??? Nice job, DE..

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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

8 posted 1999-08-11 09:51 PM

Great Job, Dream!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

JP
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

9 posted 1999-08-12 12:07 PM

Very uplifting. Nice work.

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Dum spiro, spero
JP

Saxoness

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since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

10 posted 1999-08-12 12:14 PM

My absolute favorite yet.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

angel girl
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

11 posted 1999-08-12 04:41 AM

Loved it. Very good

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

angel girl
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

12 posted 1999-08-12 04:42 AM

Very good. Loved it

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

13 posted 1999-08-12 08:28 AM

Dream, I am in awe. Once again, you've made me a poet without words. Marvelous work, love, and go on embracing that light and let it shine.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

14 posted 1999-08-12 02:31 PM

I hadn't realized there was any demand at all for spiritual poetry.

Perhaps I will submit this one to the main site, it seems to be more than popular. I don't think that popularity is why I should write though. Like most of my stuff, this one flowed easily. Incontrast, my next piece was very difficult to write.

Thank you for the support of this piece, it means much.

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