Open Poetry #1 |
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He Is With Me |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I remember when first I felt His love. Revelation was just not on my mind. It truly hit like a bolt from above. To an empty life I had been resigned. Exposed to Him was every nagging doubt. He loved me despite my hatred and sin. My feelings of despair were washed right out. I knew that I would not be alone again. I did not rail against the coming Light. When He touched my heart I began to weep. I cried for what I had lost to the Night. He touched my heart and my fears went to sleep. Now I know He walks by my side unseen. He is Jesus, the blessed Nazarene. ©1999 DreamEvil Just trying to stay versatile. ![]() ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 08-11-99).] |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
I love it! Very inspiring! Great Job! ![]() |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Well Done! ![]() ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Truly Awesome!!! Wow! I knew it wasn't gone. ![]() |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
DE.. I LOVE IT!! Im proud of you.. this poem I believe is yur best love.. *hugs* Smile.. I love it.. I really do.. lol.. did I mention that I really like it!!! WOW... hehe love ya!! ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Fantastic ... Jesus has a way of calming fear, doesn't he? Good one, DE. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Dream...very beautiful. Do you realize the demand for religious poetry out there?? ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Perhaps this belongs on the mainsite in the Spiritual Section??? Nice job, DE.. ------------------ Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done: For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits, Than I am sure I have in my whole five. ~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75 |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Great Job, Dream!! ![]() ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Very uplifting. Nice work. ------------------ Dum spiro, spero JP |
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Saxoness![]()
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
My absolute favorite yet. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Loved it. Very good ![]() ------------------ One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Very good. Loved it ![]() ------------------ One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Dream, I am in awe. Once again, you've made me a poet without words. Marvelous work, love, and go on embracing that light and let it shine. ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I hadn't realized there was any demand at all for spiritual poetry. Perhaps I will submit this one to the main site, it seems to be more than popular. I don't think that popularity is why I should write though. Like most of my stuff, this one flowed easily. Incontrast, my next piece was very difficult to write. Thank you for the support of this piece, it means much. |
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