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Please Balladeer, Sweet Balladeer....forgive me?
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Please Balladeer, Sweet Balladeer....forgive me? |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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Oh sweet Balladeer please take note that on my words I wish I'd choked. My intention was to hurt no one cause I for one enjoy the fun. What I was simply trying to say was that sometimes to my dismay. It seems the ones that work so hard are the ones that go the extra yard. You seem to have such busy days and forced to keep up poetic praise. I was hoping I could stun the masses and force them to get up off their ***es. Perhaps in poem I should have stated that responses by dumpers are belated. Your right they come and dump some words and expect great praises to be heard. The names you mentioned in your response seem to be taken for granted with nonchalance. Your responses to my poems I hold near please forgive me this poem sweet Balladeer. The intentions of my rhyming verse was not to make you shout and curse. I meant to have the masses told to help lift some of your heavy load. The moderators have lives too and I was thinking just of you. Hoping I’d lift weight off your replies. So you’d have time to slam those guys. I see my poem was taken badly and for this reason I will sadly Close my big mouth and quietly sit and try to pull my foot from it. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, Lucie dear please listen here I didn't mean to blow my stack My answer was a tribute to The patience that I lack. I feel I know you very well Through messages we send And I know you would never mean To intentionally offend. I'll forgive you - you..me,too And let's both keep in touch We both said what we did because We love this place so much. ** smooches ** |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Aaahhhh....no better way to kiss and make up, but to write a poem for eachother...  You guys are too sweet...it's dripping with ooze in here...it got in my shoe it was so deep! LOL Love you both...------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I guess we have all chewed a shoe At one time or another And digesting those tough stinky soles Can really be a bother. *G* Be glad it was your own you chose To nibble on this night Even a whiff from Long John's sock Can give you quite a fright! Great job, Lucie! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
 Life is good! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
It's that shattered one, back again and still shattered...lol But it is so wonderful to see two people react with affection and passion to what they each think and to leave barbed words out.. I take my hat off to you both...hmmmmm, well, if I was wearing one I would but hat's don't really go to well with .... For the uninitiated it's nearly midnight here.. ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lucie, I know Balladeer and he is really a good fellow. Nice poem. |
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