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christies heart
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 189
NJ, USA

0 posted 1999-08-10 04:12 PM


We played, as children, under summer's
purple skies.

We fell, as lovers, with the circling
autumn winds.

We danced, as players, in a mild winter that
cried for snow.

We died, as flowers, before the spring
was born.

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© Copyright 1999 Christine R - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-08-10 06:31 PM


Simple poem. Life is short. I enjoyed it.
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 1999-08-11 01:16 AM


Very nice. A little says a lot - lovely imagery. Post more!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-08-11 08:23 PM


very sad and I can't help but wonder if the died too young in the spring of their life

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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