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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
There's that and then another And I love you like no other As my thoughts begin to travel My feelings will unravel And I'll forever lay in pieces before you The power of this love has blinded me I knew you couldn't give me What I needed to survive you I knew you couldn't give me A reason to keep it alive, you Fooled me into believing, and now I'll forever lay in pieces before you Pieces we know I'll never recover Pieces of feelings I'll never discover- |
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PrincessDoo Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 41Cerritos, CA, USA |
this was very good ------------------ 823 |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very nice work, Rhiannon. |
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