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Rhiannon
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 95
Fayetteville, TN USA

0 posted 1999-08-09 05:58 PM


There's that and then another
And I love you like no other
As my thoughts begin to travel
My feelings will unravel
And I'll forever lay in pieces before you
The power of this love has blinded me
I knew you couldn't give me
What I needed to survive you
I knew you couldn't give me
A reason to keep it alive, you
Fooled me into believing, and now
I'll forever lay in pieces before you
Pieces we know I'll never recover
Pieces of feelings I'll never discover-

© Copyright 1999 Rhiannon - All Rights Reserved
PrincessDoo
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since 1999-07-30
Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA
1 posted 1999-08-09 08:15 PM


this was very good

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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 1999-08-11 01:55 AM


Very nice work, Rhiannon.
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