Open Poetry #1 |
Rhetoric |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep it in, keep it in, do not let him see you cry. No matter what spews from his mouth, look him eye to eye. He doesn’t like the way you lived life so many moons ago, but for some reason he made you his wife ‘tho sometimes you wished ‘twasn’t so. Oh you love him, you know it and you’ve got reason to show it; he’s just got a mouth and a stoic mind Nevertheless you think him blind. Outspoken and outstanding, so he shall always be; Don’t you let him see you crying for the you you’ve come to be. 09 Aug 99 ------------------ © KRJ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Keep it in, keep it in, do not let him see you cry. No matter what spews from his mouth, look him eye to eye. He doesn’t like the way you lived life so many moons ago, but for some reason he made you his wife ‘tho sometimes you wished ‘twasn’t so. Outspoken and outstanding, so he shall always be; Don’t you let him see you crying for the you you’ve come to be. 09 Aug 99 I think this has so much power. Alison |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Alison... you took away my goose-egg (0) poem. Thank you for sneaking up on me from a post almost 8 years old! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful Sunshine ARCTIC WIND |
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