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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 1999-08-09 11:38 AM



Keep it in, keep it in,
do not let him see you cry.
No matter what spews from his mouth,
look him eye to eye.

He doesn’t like the way you lived life
so many moons ago,
but for some reason he made you his wife
‘tho sometimes you wished ‘twasn’t so.

Oh you love him, you know it
and you’ve got reason to show it;
he’s just got a mouth and a stoic mind
Nevertheless you think him blind.

Outspoken and outstanding,
so he shall always be;
Don’t you let him see you crying
for the you you’ve come to be.

09 Aug 99


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© KRJ
Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-06-08 02:24 AM


Keep it in, keep it in,
do not let him see you cry.
No matter what spews from his mouth,
look him eye to eye.

He doesn’t like the way you lived life
so many moons ago,
but for some reason he made you his wife
‘tho sometimes you wished ‘twasn’t so.

Outspoken and outstanding,
so he shall always be;
Don’t you let him see you crying
for the you you’ve come to be.

09 Aug 99


I think this has so much power.

Alison

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2007-06-08 08:35 AM


Alison...

you took away my goose-egg (0) poem.



Thank you for sneaking up on me from a post almost 8 years old!


Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-12 09:03 PM


Beautiful Sunshine

ARCTIC WIND

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