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evolution Junior Member
since 1999-06-24
Posts 22ma, usa |
(i wasnt going to submit this, but i am, so this is for mia) you were my life i lived for you i gave myself to you to do with as you pleased but you wanted more and i have nothing else to give i give, you take but you know i will always give more so lets stop this game because i dont want to play nobody wins and now i try to get on with life life without you what was once unimaginable is now the reality i face for you were once my life and now we may never meet again i know thoughts of you will always pass in my mind as we grow apart you are still with me as i know you will always be maybe thats love's greatest testament for you may lose love but true love never goes away |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I'm glad you did post this...I really enjoyed it. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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mia Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118 |
I don't know what to say. It was beautiful. Maybe I will sound full of myself but was this written for me? If so, I really don't understand it. So I'm guessing that it was for a beautiful princess by the name of Mia (that is why I chose the name, because of all those dreamy storytales...)that once broke your heart. The poem was nicely written. keep posting... m. |
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evolution Junior Member
since 1999-06-24
Posts 22ma, usa |
it wasnt written for you, but i submitted it for you. i havent really had the desire to post lately but i will for you. dont ask me why, for some reason i think youre peachy |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
hey... i've felt THIS way before.. that's for sure... you have a very honest, open style, which I admire. (that is, unless you made this whole thing up, which is your perogative as a writer... hehehe). Seriously, pretty darned straight forward! I'm impressed with that. |
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mia Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118 |
Well...don't I feel smart..hahaha! It was a beautiful poem. I haven't posted in so long... I feel like poetry has left me... So I guess I'm not all that peachy right now... But don't stop posting... Eventually I will come back, and when I do...I'm expecting a whole lot of verses to sooth my sad soul... Sorry for the misunderstanding, I really feel stupid. Anyways... before I put my foot in my mouth again... m |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Poignant. Your sincerity is captivating. ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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