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Deception?? |
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PrincessDoo Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 41Cerritos, CA, USA |
sunny days and blue skies tainted by a handful of lies coming from the fun in the sun "i know what you did, now make it undone" i'm not the victim but i am the criminal so everyone hates cuz i put them thru bull protect the man that needs protecting he doesnt deserve the pain he been collectin punish her for what she's done dont give up, dont let her run hate her till the she cries out in pain make her unleash the blood to drain she deserves the pain she put everyone thru hurt her bad, the way she did you... just tell me who you think the "deceptor" is in this poem.. you might be surprised... ------------------ 823 |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
A thought provoking question.....I have my ideas but will keep them to myself for the time being. INclan |
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PrincessDoo Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 41Cerritos, CA, USA |
i would really like to know what you think.... ------------------ 823 |
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PrincessDoo Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 41Cerritos, CA, USA |
commmentssss??? |
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