Open Poetry #1 |
The love that was never meant to be |
P.Z Junior Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 15Singapore |
A serene summer night. The moon acting as the lovers' light. Two of them sitting side by side. Gazing out at the star-lit sky. She: I looked into his eyes. And willed myself not to cry. I know he loves me with all his heart. But yet today,we must part. Then I reached out for his hand. To let him know that I understand. We were lovers not meant to be. Though my love for him will never cease. He: She's so beautiful and so delicate. It just breaks my heart to see her hurt. I could feel her pain when she touched my hand. How I wish I could always be her man... She: He told me that everything would be fine. but we both knew that it was just a lie. For when light breaks and the sun rise, It will be time to say goodbye. He: I looked into her beautiful eyes for one last time. They looked soulful instead of their usual shine. Then I bid her farewell,in the usual way we do. Giving her a kiss,and saying,"I love you too.." She: I could still feel his lingering kiss on my lips. It was then that I felt a tear slowly slip. Cause I knew that there wont ever be a you and me. For this was a love not meant to be. |
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pusskatt Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 30Austrralia |
Beautiful! A tear slipped from my eye... |
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pusskatt Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 30Austrralia |
Beautiful! A tear slipped from my eye... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
nicely structured around the thoughts of each person. I liked it a lot. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Oh, this is so sad! Wonderfully painted picture though, I must say! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
How sad true love can be... |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Nicely done.But sad. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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P.Z Junior Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 15Singapore |
Thank you people..for all your kind comments. To Emmy:I couldnt find your poem.Perhaps you could send it to me? : ) |
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