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With Passion |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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I want you to love me with passion. I want to feel my heart race again from your touch, Loose my breath from your kiss, Drown in the depths of your eyes Smoldering with love and desire. I want to lie in your arms, Feel your heart beat, Listen to the sound of you breathing as you touch me gently. I want to know all your souls secrets, all your fears. I want to know your hopes and dreams, Your fondest memories, your wildest desires. I want to be your lover and your best friend, Your strength when you are weak, Your support when you are strong. I want to love you through the good and the bad. I want to walk on beaches hand in hand with you, And watch the sun set over the mountains in the desert. I want to travel lifes roads with you at my side. I want to age with you, And wake up some day years and years away to you, Lying by my side, And whisper in your ear… “I want you to love me with passion…” ------------------ For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting... |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
blondie, baby..... I can relate to this so well, as you already may know... wonderful piece, my friend....wonderful..  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
"Smoldering with love and desire" - How did you know how I feel? |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Thank you both for the comments...as I said in Learning to Love...I am new at free verse, (me the rhyming queen!), and any comments are so appreciated. I'm glad someone liked this! ------------------ For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Wow, I am just about breathless. There is a LOT of passion and feeling in this poem and it is well written. I can really relate to this! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, stunning. So much pure emotion. Exellent work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
A passionate piece of work my friend. |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Well Blondy gal, I must say, that I can only hope to find a women that would feel the same about me. This is an outstanding poem and I commend you. Keep up the outstanding work. You know how I love your stuff. JFreak |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOw...I think we all want that, or at least I know I do ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
yes ... these feelings, oh so familiar ...smile ... so beautifully said ... I hope my love thinks of me when she reads it ...as i think of her ... thank you |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
This was wonderful ... your passion comes through strongly, but it is tempered by something slow-burning and long-lasting ... what a lovely poem and a lovely feeling. I think I will go and write a poem for my love now ... ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh such Passion, I too am breathless beautiful work :-) |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Ah, The wonderful response. I am truly flattered. After reading the reply's I thought I would give a bit of background, I am not one to usually write in free verse, but I wrote these words a few years back for a man I was had fallen in love with to portray how deeply my feelings for him had began to run. I wanted to portray all that I wanted to share, what a real relationship meant to me, how much we would be a part of one another's lives. I hoped he would see that my feelings were not just for the heat of the moment, but for a lifetime, and that though our lives had once been seperate, I now wanted them to intertwine. I think it worked, we've been married almost two years now, and I still feel this is our mantra of sorts. I often fall asleep whispering the words "I want you to love me with passion" in his ears, and he always knows how those words signify all we share. ------------------ For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting... |
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