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....Falling On Deaf Ears....
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....Falling On Deaf Ears.... |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Memories from a distant past, Thoughts of a love that would not last. Living a lie from long ago, Seeds of sorrow, I could only sow. Am I destined for such a fate? So much anger, so much hate. I can no longer bear this weight upon my shoulders, My heart, my soul, my touch, now so much colder. I search for the light of my soul, The blood in my heart I await to reflow. I need the hope I once had, again, For deeper into despair I do descend. "Find me, find me....Dear friend!" An angel I wish you to send. Your shoulder to cry on, please lend, For my heart I can no longer fend. |
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Clmbb Junior Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 18Petersburg,Pa, USA |
I feel as if I am in the same space as you...this touched me and I know from where you write Keep writing |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
sorrowful plea...hopefully not falling on deaf ears. Great work, can truly feel the ache of love lost... |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Thank you, everyone. I realize that it's hard to understand, at times, where someone is coming from in their writing. However, it's our emotions that keep us in tune with each other. Thanks again for your continued support... [This message has been edited by Mark R. (edited 08-10-99).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I love reading your work, another good one here - very emotional...Hope you've found that angel to lean on ...if not, I'll be her...  Keep writing!------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
This was a really nice poem.I enjoyed it. |
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