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Open Poetry #1

Haiku

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 1999-08-05 10:23 AM

First rays on a glassed lake
rising mists
a distant mournful loon

INclan

Lil-bit
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 29
Tallahassee, Florida

1 posted 1999-08-05 01:45 PM

Sounds like someone wants to go fishing or camping!

You will soon. Hunting season approaches for the great hunter.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-08-05 07:02 PM

Very beautiful Inclan...but isn't Haiku 7/5/7??

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

3 posted 1999-08-06 10:54 AM

Thank you hoot_owl_rn and lil-bit. It is a snapshot off the dock at a cabin we stay at while fishing in August. Yes, that trip is coming up soon!

Hoot_owl_rn, I have not heard of such a rigid structure for haiku...I will have to check around a little.

kaile