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how will you feel... |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
I will survive, You know I will, I'll learn to live without you here… Despite the pain you've caused in me, I will move on, Completely... I know I'll make it on my own, With you I've always been alone... I don't need you by my side, When all you've done is hurt my pride... I'm strong, I know I'll carry on… Even after you are gone… However, you should think of an appeal… Cuz, without me here, How will you feel ? … [This message has been edited by ac (edited 08-05-99).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I liked this! Nice work!  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice work, ac. You know, if the person being left would just say,"I'll be fine. How about you?" it might rattle a few cages and turn some tables. |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Thank you DeVine, your response means a lot to me ...and Balladeer, yes you're right...if only more us would recognize that despite the pain we'll be ok...it's those who've left who won't be the same... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Chances are she never did feel and never will, if you know what I mean. Well done AC. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely done...like the way this one reads. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Thanks hoot_owl_rn and Andrew...i think you have a point there...he probably never did... |
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