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Misty, the Detective Diva
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Misty, the Detective Diva |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Misty woke up in the morning, made her coffee, added cream, dropped in just one lump of sugar, sat down and breathed in the steam. Sipping on her sweet, hot coffee, Misty thought about her day. She decided on a shower, drank her coffee, made her way. Misty, later, left her homefront, drove left down the boulevard, thinking that solving mysteries was some-what rather too hard. Misty turned right at the stop sign, drove along the quiet street, turned left on Central avenue, parked her car and walked her beat. Summer-time, there was a murder that someone committed then. And it was Misty’s job to find just who-done-it once again. Misty, the Detective Diva... that is what she had been named. She always found out truth in crime and she locked away the blamed. This case, though, in particular, was a mystery itself. The killer left no clues/traces to identify himself. So, Misty worked herself so hard finding all the evidence. And finally, after months of work, things were starting to make sense. And sure enough, it was Old Sam- he had killed for cheap ol’ wine. Misty booked him, locked him up. Another mystery solved fine! ©1999 ~one voice~ ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." [This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 08-05-99).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Excellent, dear! A rollicking tale indeed. Going to make it a series? ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
That is my intention, Dream. At least I hope to try!  Thank you.------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh, well done! I very much enjoyed this. ------------------ "Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain* |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you, Satiate! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
an enjoyable, light-hearted read indeed ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...Music to my Ears...hoarse whispers...just watching tv...Feel the need?...serving wench...Tribute to M.J....take a guess...sink or swim ...stolen hours...the mistress...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...life is like...insomnia...devotion...07-20-69...craving... Master...chat?...apart...plain...hush...then...vice...shameless self promotion |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Interesting story ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
I just LOVE the her name! ------------------ ©Misty |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Misty, the mystery miss. This is an excellent idea, one voice. Run with it! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
elvira and hoot: Thank you! Misty: I can certainly see why you love the name! Thank you!& Balladeer: Thank you, also, for your praise! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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