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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-08-04 12:30 PM

A form of tumble

The start and port are in your heart.
The voyage into fantasy,
The cargo is the player's part
The captain sails for ecstasy.

The ship carries a wanting soul
And empty holes to fill its sail.
Or just perhaps some beggars bowl
Of empty passions and travail?

A phantom's ship, a phantom's sea,
Loads of wishes and desire.
A phantom's cargo bonhomie,
A hole to fill with aspires.

Some journeys span, a journey to be,
The cargo is the dreamer's art.
The captain's soul the appointee,
And home and port are in your heart.

Be it ever so humble,
I love a subtle tumble.

Areya
Junior Member

since 1999-06-26

Posts 16

1 posted 1999-08-04 01:41 PM

i love your rhythm and certainly your choice of words

but i don't really get the underlying meaning... is it meant to sound a bit risque? :Þ forgive me if i'm wrong.. Hees..

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 1999-08-04 06:18 PM

Not really risque just a play on the word tumble.

Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

3 posted 1999-08-04 06:44 PM

Well, I really enjoyed it...as more of a proclimation of loving..or something to that affect. Hmmmmm...maybe I'll read it a time or three more...to see if I catch it in a different light.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-08-04 06:54 PM

Welcome, Sy. A worthy door-opener ( and a well-made change)

MissNTrope
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 43

5 posted 1999-08-04 10:59 PM

YIPPEEEE !!!!......

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-09-24 04:41 AM

Seymour~

'Be it ever so humble,
I love a subtle tumble.'

Why ... I believe Rockin' Randy has been with you a long while.
*Huggles*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-06-03 06:58 AM

Play it again, Sy....

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2002-12-30 12:52 PM

I could get sea sick, I felt this one

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2008-01-25 12:12 PM

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The first of many.
We will miss you, Sy.

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

10 posted 2008-01-27 04:06 PM

This appears to be Sy's first post with us - What an intro, eh?

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