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Open Poetry #1

The Blessing

Augchic711
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA

0 posted 1999-08-04 08:08 AM

You soar over us
Gently covering us all
Making us feel secure

But surrounded in your glory
we are so small
Our problems disappear or
slowly start to fade

All thanks to your magnificence
and the glory of your love
You watch over all of us
with no restrictions

Never asking much of us
Never feeling shame
You're always understanding
Your love is forgiving

There is no hate
There is no fear
There is no prejudice
There is no pain
In your eyes
Dear Lord.

You love us
You bless us
Eternally!

*******Augchic711*******

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 1999-08-04 08:49 AM

Yes, Yes, Yes!!! I love it! great job! So well stated. Great place to be In CHRIST!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-08-04 09:32 AM

Very Beautiful........there are a lot of opportunities out there in the writers market for Christian poetry......maybe you should look into it.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Augchic711
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA

3 posted 1999-08-04 02:53 PM

I'm honored that both of you enjoyed my poem. And thank you for the comment about publishing it. You completely have made me feel so much better about myself and my writings. Thank you all for your kind words.

*******Augchic711*******

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