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INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 1999-08-03 02:38 PM


He comes to me
When I least expect
I am not looking for him
My life felt complete
Soon I find what was missing
All of a sudden my life is upside down

I try diligently to ignore
To NOT think of this man
The harder I try
The more I think of him
He is everywhere
He doesnt know

I have learned to love
Up close and at a distance
Most of all I have learned to love
And not expect anything back
Just to give
Knowing I am better for having loved at all

Love
Letting go
Allowing things to be free
Not grasping to hold
Just letting be
Letting things take their own course

This love is different
It is full of joy
Laced with pain
It captures the heart
Torments the soul
I am better for having known this love

Tears
Laughter
Misunderstandings
Insights
Sharing
Soul-mate


8/3/1999 BDV

Published with permission for my friend, BDV.

© Copyright 1999 KKunnen - All Rights Reserved
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
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1 posted 1999-08-03 03:35 PM


"Knowing I am better for having loved"... I like... and I am!!!
Lil-bit
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since 1999-08-03
Posts 29
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 1999-08-03 04:10 PM


Hugs Inclan. You never cease to amaze or surprize me. You made me speechless - yes speechless! Hear the silence?
INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
3 posted 1999-08-03 04:23 PM


Thank You, both for the kind comments. Just to let everyone know, Lil-bit = BDV. I am glad to see you writing again, lil-bit.
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