Open Poetry #1 |
All I Feel |
Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
All I feel is hurt, Will this pain ever end? All I feel is betrayal, Will this broken heart mend? All I feel is emptiness, Will this space ever be filled? All I feel is anger, Will this chaos be stilled? You said you'd never hurt me, That I'd been hurt too many times before; But you left me Alone, wanting to die, crying on the floor. I suppose that you don't think You hurt me; I suppose you justify Your cruelty; You think you are different, And therein lies the tragedy; You WERE different, because you broke The only heart inside of me. Still, you go on, As if I never existed in your heart; And you don't even blink As you shamelessly tear mine apart. All I feel is hurt, Will this pain ever end? All I feel is betrayal, Will this broken heart mend? TO CHRIS ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I don't like this guy! (but I do like you for writing it) Nice Job |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
Thank you, Balladeer... I appreciate the feedback!! Thanks for taking the time to read and reply to my poem. ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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