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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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Speak the silence, show the confusion. We live our lives, it's just an illusion. We're wasted away, or so it seems. A mind without hopes a love without dreams. Travel the roads, time's endless mile. Furtive and casting, covered in guile. It ends at the end, where can that be? In a pot of chaos, the endless sea. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow, this is sad but beautifully written! You have done a great job here! I love it! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
"In a pot of chaos.." Now how'd you know where I live?? he he No, on a more serious note, I felt this one deserved to be dusted off and sent back - Very interesting opinion of life in general...I always say, we are just checkers in this game... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
may you have happier dreams in the coming night  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Disorder can be a beautiful thing...as long as it's ordered properly(hahaha like my pun!!!) Thank you PFF, (cough) the dust was getting thick! ------------------ ...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice. -Billy Joel [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 08-15-99).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hmmm - and how endless the sea seems right now. |
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Oscar Wilde Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 31San Francisco |
This must be your first post! Gosh you've come a long way since then. I wish I had known you then. Your biggest fan O. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh...yes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My oh my...you've come a long way Christopher.  In the midst of winter, |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Christopher- Very lovely, I liked the thoughts in thios poem, I don't know how your poetry is now so i will have to check it out and see how different it is. I was however very impressed for a first post hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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jarrett Member
since 2006-05-10
Posts 72Ut, USA |
Wow there are no words to describe how I felt when I read this... well done. |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
wow... that was beautiful |
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