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That Peaceful Feeling |
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Jocular_Jockie Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 11 |
The sun sets over the luminous breach of the ocean breaking rays through the smooth clouds like soft pillows under your head cushioning your mind and relaxing your soul as you watch the waves roll up to your toes washing up sea shells rough, smooth bumpy, or sharp all glittering with a soft sound like bath water. The foam fizzes towards the shore like bubbles tickling your senses. The damp sand under your body shines like gold glitters like fading fireworks. Sea gulls soar overheard from the tall cliffs behind you like protective walls being your bodyguard. The night wind blows softly rustling your hair feeling nice against your warm skin bringing in the smell of the open sea. Out to sea a break in the water appears and a slick dolphin flings it's body into the air sprinkling light off of it's unique body barely making but a small splash as it re-enters it's humble abode. Gazing into the sky you watch the stars twinkling like angels winking to you from above. You close your eyes and let yourself fall into that peaceful feeling. Written by: Seth Adams |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sure brings on a peacful feeling! Great job, and very uplifting! |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
last year i was selected to travel to hawaii for leadership training (for teens). i went kayaking and i felt that same kind of peace and freedom from daily life. ------------------ The world is in your hands; it is what you make of it. keep on chuggin' |
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Jocular_Jockie Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 11 |
thanks for the comments, I appreciate it. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"The sun sets over the luminous breach of the ocean breaking rays through the smooth clouds like soft pillows under your head cushioning your mind and relaxing your soul" Seth.....now that was what I was speaking of when I spoke of imagery.......well done. Ruth ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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