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Open Poetry #1

I'm Foolishly Waiting

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

0 posted 1999-08-01 09:51 PM

I'm waiting
for the moment
you look in my eyes,
To see that
you love me
without paying the price.
You laugh,
and we smile,
and we share in our ways,
but I can't force the issue
it is you that must pay.
To hold your hand
is all that I need.
To lay next beside you
and see you plead.
For you to want me
in a memorable way,
and beg for my love,
and ask me to stay.
But instead I wake up
with a memory of you
and I start to wonder
if you are true.
And then I realize
you have what you want.
A fool, and a cheater
and my heart.

CSwtThng
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 124

1 posted 1999-08-01 11:16 PM

I really enjoyed reading this. Keep your head up.

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

2 posted 1999-08-02 01:23 AM

This was enjoyable.Good poem.

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

3 posted 1999-08-02 02:54 PM

your poems always seem to bring out emotions i seem to have forgotten. i have been in this situation before, the first time i fell in love actually. i wish it were true that love cant be onesided, soemone should have told my heart that! great poem thanx agian.

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

4 posted 1999-08-03 03:13 AM

Hey,
Thank God only some of these emotions are true!!! It would be so easy to fall into it, you know???

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