Open Poetry #1 |
PITY PARTY by Sheila Thurston |
Sheila Junior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 23Lansing, Michigan, Ingham |
I threw myself a party But no body would come Because this kind of party Isn't very much fun I sat and talked all by myself About the sad events That plague my life so endlessly Of which there's no defense I told myself how said it was That no one nurtures me That I'm the one that always tends To everybody's needs I told myself it really seams That no one cares for me And I'm a human being too With my very own set of needs Sometimes it feels so heavy With no one there to tell To hold me and to comfort And help refill my well And yet to think about it I'm luckier than most That I am even able To act as my own host Some people have a party For themselves most everyday But my own pity parties Are rare and end with play As soon as I remember The reason why we're here To help someone to get through life My focus becomes quite clear The minute that we turn inward And think we've got it bad Is when to look at another's life And you'll stop feeling so sad There's always someone out there With problems that make mine small It makes me feel so selfish That I had a pity party at all Sheila Thurston June 5, 1999 ------------------ |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well written, Sheila, want to come to my next pity party? Hahaha, I'm only kidding. Elizabeth |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Sheila, This is excellent work! Your message is good and true and your lines are clean and crisp. Fine poem. fh |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome, Sheila This poem is very nicely done.... With an excellent title.. ..Glad to have you here with us.. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
nicely put...hope you are still posting? ------------------ If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~ |
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Sheila Junior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 23Lansing, Michigan, Ingham |
Thank you all for your kind comments. I've been gone, and hadn't seen your reactions to my work, thank you all. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
I was throwing myself the exact same party over at my house! We should've gotten together! Very well said, Sheila. dp |
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