Open Poetry #1 |
Prophetic Dream, II |
Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Children of Dust, I bring you glad tidings. Fortunate indeed are the young For they will witness the Great Birth. A new era will be born, But great and fearsome will be the pangs. Brother will rise against Brother. The streams will be fouled And the soil shall drink its fill; Dry winds will scatter the dust And nations will sink below the waves. All this shall the Prophet oversee, He who gives swords to children. Great is His wrath against The Children of Light, And His children will make war Against the Men of Truth. Many will stumble, None shall rise. Then shall come the Child of Light And with a Word slay the Prophet, Ending the pangs of Birth. A new era is born. Let him with ears hear. Alicat 11-2-97 ------------------ Le Jongleur Aspirante |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Still you have to answer my question of how you came about writing this piece.. I like this one better than the first though.. Keep up the good work.. Love, Lady ------------------ Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Again, this was another dream which was quite vivid. I saw a beautiful man at a podium, talking to the masses. He called the children forth and gave them swords, encouraging them to practice. He did not warn them of the danger, but delighted in seeing them kill each other. This was witnessed by me and another, abhorred at what we saw while the rest of the people cheered and watched with glee. Very disturbing, as this speaker encouraged them to seek out those who frowned at the display, and kill them as the children continued their sibling slaughter. I do have some strange dreams alright. Alicat |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hmm...wow although this read as a "call to arms", a call to "disarm" perhaps? I like it inside your head. Surreal at times, sometimes a little scary, but vivid and full of wonder too. (Did I just describe Willy Wonka's chocolate factory? I's teasin' of course ) I'm having a wonderful mind munch bro! yay YOU! |
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