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Dear daughter |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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You were but three when last I saw you Your hand in mind so trusting and fine I gave you up because I wanted the best for you but from that day on I knew the moment I let go of your hand that my love for you was what drove me on 21 years past and then I tried to find you hoped you would know of my love that allowed me to cry these tears all alone 3 weeks after I got the call The night before you'd died all alone some mad drunken driver had crashed into your car and now you and I share our hearts through a rainbow I love you my darling A year just gone but 24 years in my heart goodbye little girl treasured daughter of mine Why now? I treasure each and every rainbow and we danced on one today! ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Cindy I am so sorry for your loss. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Such a sad poem.. it touched my heart. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
This is sad. You found your daughter again. Only to lose her again before you can see her.I feel for you. |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
this was a very beautiful poem, and had so much emotion, i enjoyed it very much, and offer you my condolences. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
heart breaking poem...I'm truly sorry for your loss. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very touching |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you...loss makes you appreciate those very tiny moments ...Happiness is just a moment in time! Just as loss equals a lifetime! HUGS all ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Valor~ Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 10 |
I don't even know what to say... I am speechless... I hurt for you, your words brought that out of me. Thank you for sharing your soul. ------------------ Valor~ "Poetry is language as it is most distilled and most powerful." |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Such sweet sad words, but be glad for whatever days you had...I had a daughter who lived for three months, and I'm glad for each precious day I had. She will always be part of you and she will live on in your memories..God Bless You |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you...I do take comfort and many times happy images flash before me...my heart goes out to anyone trying to deal with loss.. HUGS all *poof* ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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