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Open Poetry #1

Snow White Dove

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 1999-07-31 03:26 PM

Why art thou the only one who feels the pain,
Do not I bleed, from blade of thy disdain?
Inner sanctums, lie within thy walls,
Whilst on the moor, thou heed not my plaintive calls,
I try to scale with love thy parapet,
But thee vanquish with poisons of thy amulet,
Thou tempts my soul with illusions of thy love,
Then fly away on wings of snow white dove,
I fear I've learned, is not love that thee require,
Tis not me, but is mine wont, that thou doth desire.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 07-31-99).]

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 1999-07-31 07:30 PM

How true it is, Mike, and beautifully stated. 'I don't love you....I just want you to love me' say the maidens

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 07-31-99).]

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-07-31 08:32 PM

Very nicely written Mike, I will be sure to look some more of yours up

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-07-31 09:20 PM

So very beautiful, Mike. I look forward to more from you.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

4 posted 1999-08-13 12:24 PM

Oh now, Balladeer....I'm not sure I agree with you! For the first time ever, I might add... We maidens don't ALL act like that ! I want to love everyone!! Hell, I do!

This maiden has a heart bigger than your ~BLEEP~ !! (and that's pretty BIG)
Very nice writing....I'm digging it all up !

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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