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Open Poetry #1
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connie
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since 1999-07-31
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houston texas
0 posted 1999-07-31 01:50 AM

farewell to unhappy endings

oh the sort i have known too well

and adeu to the uncertain rendering

of a sentence to a life filled with hell

i am life..im sublime..i am fortitude

and no martyr do i hope to be

i am breath ..i am soul..i am spirit..

i am holy and i am free..

my heart beats with raptured longing

and my hopes in the blood of the saints

my vision is shrouded with mystery

in my hand is

the key to the gate.



connie s. haynes
© Copyright 1999 connie - All Rights Reserved
Genea
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since 1999-06-15
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1 posted 1999-07-31 09:55 AM

I am responding to this because i think this poem deserves a title....[just hate to see 'untitled' as a title]...anyway....how about "Starting Over" or "Hope"...anyone else have a suggestion?
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