Open Poetry #1 |
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To Ellis........... |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, ![]() |
im trying so hard to be patient, with what youve given me, an answer, and a promise, but its not what i need. i need the love to whisper to me, through sweet tempered eyes, and tell me everythings okay, and i dont have to comprimise. i want to know you need me, above anything else, that you can see forever in me, and cherish the things weve felt. i have to trust you truly, with everything i am, and know inside my heart, you wont hurt me again. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I understand your desire....but never being hurt again is not a realistic goal. Nicely written. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Everyone has a right to that |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
sometimes its not healthy to only believe and set realistic goals, becuase then you forget how to dream. thank you for your comments. |
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