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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Why do you trip me? Why do you smile? You slug me and tease me, And leave me aside. Across from the room, You'll stand from afar, stick out your tongue, and go watch the stars. You return to my side, with a drink in your hand, we start talking nicely, until a moment arrives. I'm told that your lonely but given a chance, you dump them and leave them, without a glance. I only want answers, you confuse me inside. The laughing, and playing, is making me blind. What do you want? Is it only one night? Commitment a problem? I will not bite. You know my condition, I am stuck in a lie. So what is the problem? What's on your mind? |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
I don't know if this is something that is really going on in yourlife.Or if this just a poem you wrote that is not real in your life.I would like to comment on it. What I'm trying to ask is this really happening in your life. I feel I would be able to comment on it then.Are you asking for advice? [This message has been edited by Delores Hall (edited 07-30-99).] |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Sounds like a typical teenage male to me... it may take a while but with time and love they usually grow up. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Delores, It is real, and the person it's about is my bosses' best friend. I don't see him often, but when I do, he's right there teasing me. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
flirting can be such fun, for it's own sake, but don't worry about what he wants, think about your desires instead  ------------------ I will live my life as i, will undoubtedly die - alone. ~Morrissey~ |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
There may be something there but he may be afraid of something.It says you are stuck in a lie.Are you commited to someone else? If so that could be a powerful factor in this.Also you say he's lonely.And that he dumps them and leaves them.What exactly do you want in this?If you want him to establish a relationship you have to be prepared that he will leave you also. I also should have added earlier.That because you don't see him often it could be that he is just flirting with you and it don't mean a lot. Some people just like to flirt. [This message has been edited by Delores Hall (edited 07-31-99).] |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Delores, Yes, I've been in a committed relationship for years, but we're not "in love" with each other any more. I love the person I'm with, but it's purely platonic anymore. There are also alot of other circumstances that force me to stay with him. There are many people that tell me to stay with him, knowing all the circumstances, but say I should have affairs, I'm not sure I'm comfortable with that either because I know it's wrong. Elvira, as for my desires, this guy gets me going, but I have no idea what he wants!!! |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Tulip I would like to talk more with you about this.While I am not an expert at this I may be able to offer some insight.You can e-mail me at [email protected]. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Delores, I won't be able to e-mail you until late next week. My e-mail isn't set up on this computer, and the one that is, is in the shop. Read "Two Lives Entwined" and maybe you'll understand a little better... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Say no more...know what you're going through...is there EVER any way to find out what some guys want? |
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