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Open Poetry #1

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Sheila
Junior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 23
Lansing, Michigan, Ingham

0 posted 1999-07-30 12:32 PM

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[This message has been edited by Sheila (edited 08-01-99).]

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

1 posted 1999-07-30 01:17 PM

"That which does not kill us only makes us stronger" No, I am in no way making light of your situation. My heart goes out to you! Stay as close as you can to your father.....waste no moments! With no additional information to go on...I pray the situation is resolvable and that your father will continue to be with you for many more years.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-07-30 01:18 PM

Extreamly sincere.....this poem really works, the rhyme, the rythym, the thoughts behind it. Very well written, you should be commended.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 1999-07-30 01:25 PM

Sheila: My heart goes out to you... But I echo INclan... waste no moments... share as much as you can while you can... none of us are guaranteed a tomorrow.

Sheila
Junior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 23
Lansing, Michigan, Ingham

4 posted 1999-07-30 06:43 PM

I know, I've been here before...thanks for the messages...life goes on, and so do I.

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