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Bedtime for Boys |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458
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As the sun goes down Its time for rest My weary three sons Put up thier best. They putter and dink They resist and slink Away from the chores That result in closed doors. Its time for showers, teeth and hair, At times I think they must Gang up in a pair. They can think of more reasons Than the ocean has sand To put off the inevitable Of going to sleep. But finally they shut those weary, sweet eyes Its off to dreamland For three bedy-by guys. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
That was cute.That is just like kids,allways trying to stay out of bed. Happy writing. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I loved it too - but then, I've been there with you to grind my teeth in time with yours - they are precious, though |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sometimes the sweetest poems come from the most ordinary things. This is one of those times. Nice job. |
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VirginLady Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 14UK |
Lor Conjures up wonderful imagery here but what the heck is a "dink?"...My mind is wondering if it's a young lad with a lisp, an error or something american I haven't had the pleasure of..:-))) But beautiful thoughts.. Sweet dreams HUGS ------------------ Rainbows are special! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
That brings back memories of my two boys younger years |
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