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JellyBean Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 24Durham, CA 95938 |
Unsaid To my sweet, all the things I never said. All those little things, that filled my heart with dread. I was never able to tell you, all the emotions that I felt. All the feelings that I held inside, those with which I had dealt. The longing on those cold nights, to have your arms around me tight. And to see your tender eyes, the ones I love and are my prize. The kiss from your gentle lips, oh, the thing I made myself miss! Your loving caress, ... I swear I tried my best. Those words I could not form, those words I keep with such regret, still linger in my throat simply unable to form, but I don’t fret. I know that somewhere, somewhere deep inside, my heart has met with yours, and they cling together with uttermost pride. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is a sweet poem! Nice |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Very sweet.I like it~Lily ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive* |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Living with the dream of what could have been...such melancholy. Good, expressive work. |
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JellyBean Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 24Durham, CA 95938 |
THANX [This message has been edited by JellyBean (edited 07-31-99).] |
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JellyBean Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 24Durham, CA 95938 |
If you read this, please give your comments. Thanx. |
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