Open Poetry #1 |
Death: You will know me by my touch, it will be your last! |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Laughing, crying, smiling and frowning, Emotions that dictate our thoughts- They come from within, even when clowning, And that's what life's all about. We face each day not knowing it's content, With hopes it will be better than last, But each new day brings something quite different, And they all fly by us so fast. Treasure each day, your family and friends, Take little for granted because; It may be your last, or for the one's that you meet, Life works that way...yes it does. Hug your kids, your friends-your pets, Do this day after day. So when the time comes, you'll have no regrets, Do this now, don't delay. Time is short, you never know when, You'll be able to see these people again, The saddest thing when one of them dies, It's seldom you have the chance for good-byes. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
How true this is I lost my father over 20 years ago. And I was only allowed to say goodbye in my dreams. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Thank you for posting this. It is good advice for sure. Specially the part about hugging your kids......this would indeed be a better place if we hugged our kids more. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I love you ma-n-n-n-n-n-n. psst, can I have your Bud Light? Toe Well spoken, as from one who has missed goodbyes. It's well spoken, old Toe. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Toerag: Incredible poem... a reminder we should all heed! |
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Words of great wisdom, Toerag. Now, if I can just talk my dog into letting me hug him....... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I'm hip to that. Kisses and hugs when I leave... same when I come home. Doesn't matter if I'm off to work, to the store, or just down the street. You just never know when it will be your last. Here's hopping it ain't for a long, long time. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Toe~ I was archiving and found this ... realized just how poignant it is in view of the recent events .... God ... one hopes we learn to make each moment count~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
This is a very sobering poem...for me, at least. I really like the title...it definetly caught my attention. I really enjoyed reading this. Nice job! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
An oldie that should be read again. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A hundred years more wouldn't be enough... and a thousand goodbyes wouldn't make being without you easier. GodSpeed...and don't have too much fun without me, okay? |
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