untitled(help) - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #1

untitled(help)

culvram
New Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 8
Culver,OR USA

0 posted 1999-07-29 02:21 AM

You feel trapped,
you can't get away.
Even the little things,
they set you off every day.
It is something,
that you have built up inside.
You haven't yet learned,
that from it, you can't hide.
The people around you,
they feel it too.
Give them a chance,
they care about you.
There are people who listen,
but can't seem to make sense.
Of your situation,
and why you're so tense.
Anger is worthless,
of this there's no doubt.
Just sit down and talk,
let your feelings come out.
Things will get better,
if you just talk them through.
You must always remember,
to your feelings be true.

------------------
RAM

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

1 posted 1999-07-29 02:36 AM

nice message...too many people in this world are afraid to discuss their feelings

------------------
one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...Music to my Ears...your countenance...just watching tv...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J....Feel the need?...serving wench...a little girl...the mistress...stolen hours...Perfection...07-20-69...devotion...
Master...apart...plain...chat?

Kiya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 31
Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S.

2 posted 1999-07-29 03:28 AM

That was an excellent poem. Maybe you could use "Anger is Worthless". Hope that I have helped you.

------------------
Kiya Bowermaster

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.