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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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Love-embraced, that first soft time so gently so sweetly the merest touch, a shivering glance of skin against skin, So hot the sun of Egypt burned through my gasping heart Seeking an oasis to uncertain Passion I know no solace exists but to drown in your depthless eyes The words my heart call float unnoticed in the air our combined breath cannot stir. Love, true, you have graced my life yet I cannot claim you cannot feel your sweet touch unless in accidental passing |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
Very interesting, Severn. I thought the oasis very tempting! Is this written from your experience, and if so, go after her/him! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Uummm...just one question...are you male or female ??? Hadn't really thought about it, assumed you were a HE...and if you are, you wrote this for me, right ? ; ) He he he It's very very nice as usual... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I guess your name did strike me as a bit manly, but I'll take your word for it ( that your a she) You're so lucky to have found a good match...I didn't realize there were any left ?? I love your work nonetheless -- I really like your writing style...Good thing I found out you're a female BEFORE I fell in love !! LOL Ha ha ha he he he Forgive me - I still love your work - keep writing..!!. ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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