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Open Poetry #1

My Love, My Precious One

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

0 posted 1999-06-18 07:56 AM

'Tis true, my love, my precious one ~
....I wish I could be you.
Your trust and love for all I do,
....Your joy with each day's sun.

I envy so your faith in me,
....No questions in your heart.
Our souls enjoined right from the start,
....And for eternity.

Your innocence and smile of gold
....Embrace me as you sleep.
My wisdom, though, I'd like to keep.
....You're merely eight months old.
*digging into my archives again*

Alicat
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since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

1 posted 1999-06-18 12:28 PM

Wow...you have captured that fleeting moment in life when someone else's world revolves around you with unconditional love bequethed. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.

Nan, I think I might have gotten over that slump...just check out my next post.

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Le Jongleur Aspirante

JANNA
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since 1999-06-18

Posts 51
arlington, tx usa

2 posted 1999-06-18 11:38 PM

What a beautiful poem! I have just discovered this site and have fallen in love!! You so depicted every mother's love and awe at how a child loves. This brought tears to my eyes. Our children are such gifts- thanks for portraying it so beauifully!!

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 1999-07-16 01:13 AM

azblond
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since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

4 posted 1999-07-16 03:54 AM

You have touched my soul, and made me hug my Daughter sleeping peacefully (at last)...

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

5 posted 2008-01-11 05:30 PM

very sweet!

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