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Open Poetry #1

A freeverse by a friend

deannamarie
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
WI

0 posted 1999-07-28 12:26 PM

This was written by one of my friends. It's rather dark.

our souls are torn apart,
creating an everlasting torture
amongst my heart making it
bleed over our external bodies
burning the flesh making it
seem as another hellish torment
ripe along the seems of my
whole existence, never to see
the daylight of holiness, only
to see our downfall of our
bloodshed onto others, having
our angels of good and bad
pull at our limbs only to receive
the parts of us they don't want
or need, to drowned in the blood
tears they shed as they fall
to annihilation

James Luhman

[This message has been edited by deannamarie (edited 07-28-99).]

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 1999-07-28 06:33 PM

I don't quite know what to say about this one. It is sad to me that so many seem so depressed. But it is a good thing it comes out in poetry for that is good for the soul.

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