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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-07-28 10:46 AM

My fondest wish
and greatest fear
are one and the same.
One day you
will stand on your own.

Little sister,
I held you so near
and drank
all your shame.
I care too,
with this
heart of stone.

When first we met
you seemed a child
laughing and carefree.
Soon I found
you were less
and more.

I was dark
and a little wild,
spiteful and cocky.
I was bound
to help
you to soar.

I barely knew
what friendship was,
nervously unsure.
Still I knew
I wanted
you well.

Love works wonders,
indeed it does,
as it feels so pure.
For it blew out
my need
for Hell.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

leelew
Member

since 1999-07-10

Posts 89
highmount,ny,usa

1 posted 1999-07-28 10:51 AM

Soft and gentle, like the heart of the one it is written for.I love it!!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 1999-07-28 10:52 AM

Excellent, Dream.

tori
Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

3 posted 1999-07-28 11:00 AM

Such a lucky lady
Truly beautiful DE

Thinking!!!
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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

4 posted 1999-07-28 01:09 PM

Truly touching. Thank you for sharing this!

Gentle Soul
Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

5 posted 1999-07-28 02:56 PM

Oh DE... you have put tears in my eyes, you have no idea how much you have helped me.. *big hugs* I love ya brother.. and I always will..

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Gënt£ë¤§°û£

CSwtThng
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 124

6 posted 1999-07-28 03:17 PM

This was truly beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your work.

CSwtThng

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

7 posted 1999-07-28 09:18 PM

'Tis a tribute to my Little Sister, who needed to hear such words.

IsabelleSkye
Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

8 posted 1999-07-28 09:26 PM

Very nice, and I agree, it IS like the person it is written for
*hugs*
GREAT! (Tony the Tiger imitation)
I.Skye

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

9 posted 1999-07-28 10:37 PM

Most excellent to see such brotherly love!!!
That is terrific. You have done a great job here, and most defenitly the words she needs to hear. God Bless Ya.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

10 posted 1999-07-28 10:51 PM

Very sweet and touching...

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

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