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deannamarie
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
WI

0 posted 1999-07-28 09:08 AM


Do you ever feel so frustrated
you feel you're gonna burst?
You just wanna scream
it seems so unjust

The feeling inside rises so high
you feel you're gonna snap
but don't you say a word
cuz you may have to take it back

Relax and think it over
just wait and take a breath
you don't wanna do something
you might later regret

Once the urge is gone
you'll feel a whole lot better
cuz you kept your calm and cool
and spoke no words in anger

Remember what I said
or it could turn into a mess
relax and think it over
just wait and breath




[This message has been edited by deannamarie (edited 07-28-99).]

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-07-28 09:17 AM


This is very nice also. I think we all need to learn how to tame our tounge. That is a hard thing to do in the heat of the moment.
We all need to stop and take a deeeeeep breath!

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